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Smelly?

I know what I’m about to tell you might surprise you or might not but anyway here’s what happened. I woke up in the morning to find the smell of my mum’s blueberry muffins and they stank,but I love the smell of my mum’s berry muffin’s and she definitely didn’t change the recipe because it tasted wonderful ( it always does.) But I couldn’t help myself finish the rest of the muffin because of it’s awful stench. It was weird because everything that I used to think smell nice turned into this awful smell. Will I ever be able to smell properly?

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Science Week

Today, Boffin John came to orcs and did an assembly for the whole school. He talked about Science and showed us lots of amazing experiments, ( I now some of them).

After assembly year 6 had to stay down stairs to do there   Boffin Demonstration. One of my favorite thing was when he put dry ice in the  bowls and put steaming water. It was very cool because the steam did go across the floor like a hollogram of water.

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Dr Snow came to year 6

Today Dr Snow came to year 6 to tell use about what he did in Africa. He told use about his amazing adventures. I’ve learnt a lot about Africa since he told everyone about it. One of the most interesting things was what people in Africa wear in special events like a wedding or a school party. Dr Snow also showed use his book with had lots of wonderful pictures.

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The oval pig………….

One day the oval pig was trotting down the street.Suddenly he saw old Mcdonald. The oval pig was so suprised ,he hadn’t seen him in ages but pig knew he was going to turn him into. BACON!!!! The pig started trotting faster than ever. His snout looking back every 5 minutes. Old Mcdonald was right behind him…

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Blind?

Everything was black but I knew It wasn’t a dream. I pinched myself just to make sure. Nope it’s definitely not a dream. I tried to make myself believe that I was asleep but It wasn’t working. Out of nowhere beams of sunlight shoot into my eyes and slowly I could see things. It was a miracle. Suddenly I was able to see again. I was so happy that I nearly jumped of the Balcony into the open world. I make sure that I always remember how lucky I am to see,because many people cannot because they were born blind.

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Persuasive letter

Dear Mrs Hurst,

I am writing to persuade you to let year 6 go to Thorpe park. I have a couple of reasons why I strongly believe that year 6 should go to Thorpe park.

Firstly year 6 have been working so hard during there SATs. Everything that year 6 have done after their SATs, they all need to have a little more fun. It’s not good for year 6 to stay in the playground, they all need to go outside of the school and play more for example: Thorpe park. Year 6 often need to have more fun not just in the playground, Thorpe park to.

Secondly, year 6 have worked to hard for them to finish their SATs. Before we have our half terms the pupils of year6 do their practice SATs so they can prepare for their real SATs. This means the teachers are providing to much information for the pupils of year 6 to handle. After their SATs the puipls don’t need to go on a educational trip they can go on fun trips so they can put their minds os SATs.

Do you really want them to not have fun at all?

I hope youv’e desided that year 6 should go to Thorpe park.

Your sinserly

Aleesha


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support chelsea not manchester united

To mr koroma

Im ritting to persuade you to stop supporting manchester united.

I have a couple of reasonse why you shoudint support manchester united.

Firstly when you see manchester united play on tv or on the stduim it cost a lot of money but when  you see manchester unitedvs the arther team like chelsea manu are selfish, bad passing, and fouling players.  But manchester united only has five good players and one good manegearand, boring to watch.

Scondly you don’t just support manchester united you don’t were the manchester united kit. Every time you do pe with us you were a chelsea kit all the time and remeber don’t  support manchester united, and support chelsea.

Ihope you under stand why i gave you the letter and the reasonse for stoping for supporting  manchester united. I slowly blieve that you should support chelsea.

from Anas

 


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persuasive letter by Liyba

To Mr Koroma,

I am writing to persuade you to do girls football once a week. I have a couple of reasons why.

My first reason is that if you do girls football once every two weeks, we might forget everything you have taught us. Lots of girls want to be footballers when they grow up. If we do a tournament we might never win because we need practice. Do you want us to lose every game?

My second reason is our health. Lots of girls come to girls football to become fit, we don’t have enough exercise. We need to give our minds a rest after all the hard work that we do. Do you want us to become lazy?

I hope that you have considered doing girls football once every week. girls mite forget everything and we might become lazy.

Yours sincerely,

liyba


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My letter to Mr Koroma

To Mr Koroma  I’m writing to poswade you to stop suporting Man U.Because Man U dosen’t have alot of good players(only 5).

My first reason is it’s boring to watch Man U play all day and they are selfish because they don’t pas. With the time you waysted you could go shoping. Do you realy whant to waset your time?

My second and last reason is you were Chelsea kit insted of wereing a Man U kit. If you were a Chelsea kit then wiye don’t suport Chelsea.

From Hubert

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Letter to Miss Duley

To Miss Duley,

I am writing to persuade you to stop buying lots of clothes. I have a couple of reasons why I have chosen this subject.

My firts reanson is that it won’t all fit in one wardrope. Many shoes or clothes may not fit, this may cause your wardrope to braek or may not close. Is this what you want? Is it worth destroying your furniture?

Secondly, many items may cost alot of money such as : designer shoes,bags,trousers,skirts,tops or dress’. Surely you would not like to waste all your money buying clothes. Are you willing to give up your hard worked money on all these things?

My third and final reason is that the material could break. Many clothes in the past has been ripped. Alot of clothes may be allergic to your skin. Do you want to wait for the laugh of embarisment?

I hope you understand my reasons. Here is a reacape of the reasons : wardrope, cost and the material.

Yours sincerely,

Eileen

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persuasive letter

In year 6 we have been learning about persuasive letters and today we finally got to do our own.

To Miss Duley,

I am writing to persuade you to start wow girls fitness. I have a couple persuasive reasons why this fantastic club should be on the run again.

My first reason is about girls enjoying this club. Most importantly its fun to go out doors and have a little run. It is also a good idea to breathe in some fresh air, instead of sitting in side and playing games or watching TV. Some times we get seriously bored in doors. Also girls fitness is a club were boys are not to come, and every girl needs a break a way from boys.

My second and final reason is about health. Firstly as you know during winter we all got a bit chubby and lazy and a little of a run won’t hurt. Also some of us may have added on pounds! This club improves on your muscles, running and body shape (and that’s what we need). Do you want us to get even more fatter, just because you didn’t start this club!

I hope you understand my well thought through reasons. Thank you for giving up your time for reading this letter.

Your sincerely Iga

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My letter to Mr Koroma

To Mr Koroma,

I am writing to persuade you to start girls football every school time lunches. Here are a few reasons why I think this.

My first reason is that not a lot of girls will be able to make it as they have, maybe because of family issues or important places to go due to their religion or family.This is why it will be much easier to start the club within school times.Only greedy people think about themself.

My second reason is that, after school, football lessons are not very long and the time just runs out but children enjoy long lessons of football because they enjoy it. So having it between school at lunchtime will give them enough time to enjoy themself. Anyone that destroys children fun should feel incredibly guilty like they have just comitted a crime. Destroying childrens fun is a crime.

My third and Final reason is that football is a very healthy sport and burns of a lot of calories. It will make the children extremely fit and healthy because they will be burning most of the calories they have just eaten. Don’t you want to be applauded for the rest of your life from parents because you have made their child/children fit and healthy?

I hope you consider these reasons and make a good choice. Remember the children are depending on you.

Your sincerely, Siddeeqah

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Persuasive letter

Dear Miss Duley,

am writing to persuade you to start doing wow girls fitness. I have a few reasons why you should start this club.

My first reason is that wow girls fitness is good for your health. This sport can make you have more energy and get stronger. In the same way you could improve yourgymnastic moves and get more flexible . In addition to , fitness could improve your balance and that can help your hockey skills.

My second reason is that this club could be fun for you . You should start knew things that you like. Children in the fitness club will be really happy is you join with them ,you could even help them if they struggle with something . This club is improving your fitness skills and making you to have fun. Do you really want to miss it?

I hope you understood my reasons why you should start wow girls fitness . I strongly belive that this is best for you .

 

Your sincerly Camelia

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IPADS 4 SCHOOL

Dear Mr Hurst,

Mt first reason is iPads are incredible edition to the school. If we have iPads can improve our learning. It’s a massive improvement to our school. Furthermore you have to call the computers repairers to the old computers. We can use the pads for writing instead of books, always buy new books.Do you want fanstatic school or dull, boring school. DO YOU?

My second  reason is ipads are better and creative. Our computers are getting old and need a new replacement.Last year coms,mouses and keyboards got stolen.Our unfountate computers are getting slower every second.The computers fruste childrens and adults.Do you want be new or old.

My third and final reason is pads are more fun.Instead of computers.Ipads are better.Chilling out with friends,playing games and watching youtube.

Finally, I hope you considered bgetting us ipads.Please take further notice.thank you.

 

yors sincerely Henry.

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persuasive letter by kiyarash

To Mr. koroma

I am writing to persuade you to start supporting Chelsea.I have a couple reasons why I think you you should do this.

My first reason is that Chelsea are on top of the league. Chelsea is one of the best football team in the world or even the best team in the world for some people. The blues have won lots of trophys, like the F.A cup, UEFA cup, capital one, BPL and the europa cup. This amazing team has also donated lots of money for charity.

My second and final reason is that the blue lions have better players and more expensive players. Most people support this team because of the expensive players, for exaple the best player is worth £80 mil. You will be the odd man out if you dont support Chelsea. Dont you want to be a winner?

 

Yours sincerely,

 

Kiyarash

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persuasive letter by Mylica

To Miss Duley,

I am writing to persuade you to start wow girls fitness  . I have a couple of reasons why I believe that these reasons are the best option to start this energetic activity.

My first reason is that starting wow girls fitness is good for our health. For example it gives us more energy, gets our heart pumping, gets girls a lot stronger and also it makes  girls to not be lazy. Further more without starting wow girls fitness and not getting exercise could give girls and teacher  really bad illness such as high blood pressure. Do you want to not get fit and have really bad illness?

My second reason and final reason is that starting this activity will make us have a lot of fun . It would be nice go to parks in the summer to exercise their because the weather would be warm however more girls will join because they can see how fun this activity is . Do you want girls to have fun or not?

I hope you have understood my reason and why it is good for our health and why it is good to do this activity. I strongly believe you should  start wow girls fitness.

yours sincerely Mylica

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Persuasive Letter-Persuading the Government-Lotty

To,

The Government

I am writing to try and persuade you to ban floating lanterns and helium balloons. I have a few reasons why these are such terrible inventions, which I will explain throughout this letter.

I will start by pointing out a very serious and sad matter: thousands of animals are hurt or killed every day due to floating lanterns and helium balloons. Poor, innocent animals cad be killed by, swallowing a balloon and choking, birds can get court up in a floating lantern and fall to it’s death. How would you like it if you let this go on and thousands of species of animals were made extinct?

My second reason is that 48.7% of forest fires are created by floating lanterns that land when they are still lit. This destroys animal’s habitat and wastes yet more wood from trees. Flouting lanterns should be BANNED!

My third and last reason is that if floating lanterns and balloons (with helium) land near each other then there would be a chemical reaction which would destroy the land near by.

I truly thank you for reading this letter, and I hope you will consider banning flouting lanterns and helium balloons that destroy forests and other surrounding land

Yours Sincerely, Lotty

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persuasive letter by safeena

To the director of F.I.F.A,

I am writing to persuade you why the world cup should end . I have several reasons why ,by the end of this letter I would hoped to change your thoughts on this subject.Here are some of them.

To start of with I know that money is a problem  for everyone, I can change that around only with a signature .This  so called sport named football is a money eating machine that spends your money  on players , stadium and to direct itself on TV .In my truly honest opinion football is the most expensive sport ever to be made.

My second and final reason is that the obesity in the U.K is increasing hugely.Many people are watching and playing ( which can be bad for your eyesight) on the latest technology  instead  of having fresh air. WHATS THE REAL TRUTH ABOUT FOOTBALL?

To conclude , I hope you understand my reasons for stopping the world cup from taking place. I honestly believe that it is a money eating machine and it try’s to make our body shape larger.

 

yours sincerely

Safeena Hussain

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Persuasive Letter

To Mrs Hurst

I am writing to you to persuade you to let us have phones in school. I have a couple of reasons why I strongly believe we should have phones in school.

My first reason is that we should have phones in school to be safe for the children who live far away. For example you might get lots while walking to your home. Also you will be scared if someone takes you, so you should ring your parents to let them know where you are. So we need phones in school for children that live far from the school. Do you want children to lose contact with their parents?

My second and final reason is that we should have phones in school is to help us learn. Here are some examples you can do using your phone. Record yourself in different lessons, take pictures of your work, your phone can help you with hard questions and also explain lessons you don’t understand. That’s how phones can be useful in all lessons.

I hope you can understand my reasons to let us have phones in school. I strongly believe we should have our phones in school.

 

Yours sincerely Sara

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My letter

Dear Mr Koroma ,

I am writing to persuade you to stop surpporting Manchester United . I have a couple of reasons why you should agree.

My first reason is 50% of fan left the team to surpport another club. As alot of people know, Manchester United have been failing to impress the public because of losing important matches . Will Man United fight back and win important games?

My second and final reason is ManU waste too much money on rubbish players for example Foal Cowell and Wayen Rooney. As well as that ManU also waste too much money on getting players.

I hope you take these reason into consideration.

Yours Sincely

Anjana

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To Reading borough council

I am writing to persuade you to widen the space in Oxford road community school. I have a couple of reasons why this is your best option.

My first reason why O.R.C.S should have more space is because theirs a lot of children but very little space for them to move around. If you just improve the school with more space, you will see big changes and will realise what you done was a good job.

My second reason why is that I believe that if their is no space it will be warm and the children will stink. It will also be dangerous because the children could get injured  by bumping to each. That’s why now children are very cautious and is  starting to not like the school. Do you really want to the kids in danger?

I hope you understand  my reason and will reply back to what I said to you. The children will surely like it and will make big changes in the future.

Yours sincerely Kamil

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Persuasive Letter

To: Mr Lyford,

I am writing to persuade you to buy more equipment for the school. I gave a couple of reasons why you should agree.

My first reason is that children should have the right to have fun while, playing with their friends using the equipment. I strongly believe that they should not waste there lunch/break talking or doing something that is a waste of time.

My second and final reason is that the equipment are getting old. Also when some people play football or some other sport it can lead to kicking or hitting the ball to high that can cause the ball to go over the fence. Despite having lots of money that is spear, you can use that extra money to buy more equipment for the school. Do you want your school to be a happy place?

I hope you have know understood my point of vie and will buy the equipment for the school.

From: Laiba

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persuasive letter

To Mr Koroma,

I’m writing to you to persuade you  to do more girls football club twice a week, I have few reasons why you should do girls  football.

My first reason is that children need more excise by practicing and having fun. When you practice  more you learn more. Do you really want us to be lazy and doing nothing after school?

My second and last reason is that girls football is extremely popular. You should do football for KS1 and KS2 after school. I  thought it should be two hours then one hour because you have more time to do stuff, you should change days on to Tuesdays and Thursdays because some children  might have clubs on Mondays,Wednesdays and Fridays or do something else. Do you want us to stop being fit or not ?

I hope you understand my reasons

From Wiktoria

 

 

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My persuasive letter !

To Mr Koroma ,

I am writing to persuade you to start girls football two days a week. Here are some reasons I belive you should start girls football .

My first reason is if you dont start girls football two days a week , children can get bored at home with nothing to do as well as children do bad choices if theres nothing to do . I have chosen for you to do two days because on the other day children could have a club but still wanted to do girls football. Do you want to feel bad for children doing an another club but still wanted to do girls football , is that what u want ?

My second reason is children need to get fit for example; excise and sports . It is inportant that children get active for not to get lazy , when your older you not to get crabs and unheathly. Furthermore, its extremly important for kids ( and alduts) to be heathly for your body not to get lazy .

I hope you understand my letter for you to start girls football.

your sincerley , luana

 

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MR KOROMA DO FOOTBALL 2 WEEK

To Mr Koroma,

I am writing to persuade you to do more than 2 weeks of football. I have a couple of reasons why you should do football more often.

My first reason is that, we have to wait for over two weeks until its boys football, therefore we will lake in our skills. Many football players such as Neymar ,Pele and Roberto Carlos believe that practice makes perfect.

One of the main and last reasons I have is that, we need to get active and other stuff. Over a billion people around the world believe that  if you are not active it will cause our body to be lazy, due to having breathing problems/sore legs.

I hope you understand and listen to this idea of doing 2 weeks of football. The reason I am writing to you about this is because almost all the boys who come to boys football agreed to this.

Your Sincerely, Samir.

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stop supporting Man u

 

 

Dear Mr Koroma,

I’m trying to persuade you to stop supporting Manchester united.

My first reason is Man u are not good because they are 4th in the league. They have 3 to 4 good players and Rooney hogs the ball the players don’t do what they are told. The manager said no to Ronaldo.

Secondly when you watch them and they lose you can get depressed. When you come to school you will be a grumpy old man. When you are grumpy it can affect the children because if they ask a question you could shout at them. Do you won’t to be a grumpy old man?

I hope you have changed your mind.

From Jayden

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My letter to Mrs Whiteway

Mrs Whiteway,

I am writing to persuade you to stop eating chocolate. I have a few reasons why you should stop.

My first reason is that eating chocolate is bad for your health. Chocolate can cause many skin problems, as the sugar and the ingriedients may poison your skin effecting it and making it all rugh and lumpy. Chocolate can effect your life in many different ways such as making you fat and lazy. This can change your life in one simple day. Would you like to end up in hospital because of chocolate?

Secondly the ingriedients of chocolate would horrofy you if you read them. In one mini chocolate egg their can be up to 2 teaspoons of sugar, 109 calories and 1-2 teaspoons of salt. Sugar can go much further than just making you fat, it may make you feel unwell and you could throw up, but in the worst case you could get diabetes.

My third and final reason is how much money you spend on chocolate. Think of what you could be spending your hard earnt money on if you wouldn’t spend it on chocolate. If you would spend to much money on chocolate you could overpay yourself and in the worst case become poor. Would you like to live under the bridge?

I hope you consider and take in my reasons. I’m hoping I persuaded you to stop eating chocolate.

Kind regards Isabella.

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100wc week 25 My weird horse

Hi, I’m Emily and I live on a farm with my very weird horse. His name is pipe I know right his name is so weird. However the most weird thing about him is that he is green! The most amzing memory of his it that one day my sister ( Rose) who cat once nearly sinked in my swimming pool had been saved by pipe. The cool thing was he swam carefully through the water to save her. I so glade I had pipe he was my best friend and my everything. I so miss him. Sadly, know he is died.


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100 wc week 24 The crazy dream

Finally I am going to Spain I just cant wait. I gonna see my grandparents, so exiting. Then when I looked ot of the plan window…….. I saw red spooky clouds, at that very moment my heart start to thump faster every seacond. Suddnly the plan shaked and went right to left. Ahhhhhhhh! My scream. The plan crashed!! I wake up, I’m a live but not in a plan I on my bed. Ohh it was a horrible nightmare. I so glade I’m a live. Finally know I am going to Spain to see my gradparents. I so cant wait.


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Never wake up.100wc Iga

I was sitting next to my window, still it was morning my cat,Mint,laid gently on my laps as I drank my tea.The silence was  deafening.Snow fell down as it lapped on the tree’s.I closed my eyes.But when I  opened them, I saw a girl playing in the snow she had handcuffs on her but she looked happy.She was dancing in a dress, although it was really cold.Then her beady eyes stared into mine bringing out my deepest fears.She started to bang on my door.I screamed.Freezing at every bang she made, I could’t move.she got me. I  was crying trying to wake up but nothing worked.


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Liyba 100wc week 21 The dead is awake

The silence was deafening. the only thing t could hear was wolves howling at the bright moon. fog coverd the floor. Suddenly the floor started shaking, some how I ended up in a grave yard, it was scary, it was dark.Slowly zombies came out from th floor, I ran they followed me. I started sreaming help! Help! The more I ran the Igot colser to the zombies. One of the zombies grabed me, they would not let go of me. AHHH! All arond Icould see was white I was died. My name is lucy. I’m sorry.


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100wc Anjana

The silence was defining  , it was time to leave my weekend camping trip but all was not right the day we were suppose  to go. It all started  the night we arrived something bright caught  my family ‘s attention .The day we left was the nightmare beginning . Dad kept on losing track of the way out but it was no hope of finding the way out. Something hit the car .We swerved side to side . One by one everyone of my family was disappear  . It was only me and my sister to find home  .How are we going to find home?AAHHHHH!….


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Was it a dream?

The silence was deafening.I opened my mouth to let out a scream but no sound came out.As I looked to my left and right I tried to make my way to the house but I couldn’t move, It felt like my feet had been stuck to the ground with super glue.I could feel the cold air trying to trap my feet so it will turn numb.Whatever I did my feet would not move.I closed my eyes to help me think but as I opened them I could feel the warmth of my bed, to my surprise I was in my bed.How did I get here?


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Top 10 richest football club

1.   Real Madrid’s revenue is 459.5 million

2.Manchester United’s revenue is 518 million

3.  Bayern Munich’s revenue is €487.5 million

4. FC Barcelona’s revenue is €484.6 million

5.   Paris Saint Germain’s revenue is €474.2 million

6.  Manchester City’s revenue is €414.4 million

7.  Chelsea’s revenue is €387.9 million

8.   Arsenal”s revenue is €359.3 million

9.  Liverpool’s revenue is €305.9 million

10.   Juventus’ revenue is  € 279.4 million


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100wc by laiba A day to remember

The silence was deafeing………………..

My eyes shinned, like its never done before.

Bang! My death appeared in front of my little brown eyes. I was shooked. I was hanging on something it was my curten which was ripped. My heart was tumping faster every minute. I was out just a meter away from the wet floor. I was so scared, tears were coming out from my eyes. What shell I do? I had so many question in my head. Suddnly my fingers stared to sweat. Slowly but immediately my fingers slipped.  I’m lieing in the cold floor. Red blood surrounded

 


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Prannoy’s 100wc 22nd week

Sweets. I LOVE sweets. I really do. Every single night, I have very very sweet dreams, about living in sweet kingdoms or winning the eating sweets competition. But lately a have been having bad dreams about sweets. Once when I was in a bad dream, I went to a sweet shop, well I did’t actually went to the shop, it was like pulling my feet towards it,and it didn’t look that friendlily at all. In the shop I saw an old lady, she was wearing a weird skirt, especially for an old lady. She offered me a sweet,it said sweet on the wrapper, so  I tried  it because I always loved trying new sweets. It’s so sour, but it said ‘sweet’ on the wrapper, but why….


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The Bridge!!!

I wasn’t to keen on this `family  trip’ especially with my new DAD,Steve, because all my life it’s been me and my mum (as my dad died when I was young) but it didn’t mean that some man can come and steal me and mum, even if I didn’t know my dad.It was on the journey I had been told that we was going camping.I’ve never been camping but I don’t think it will be great since Steve is here.We arrived!, and I’d noticed that a wheel of our car had been parked on a bridge.Suddenly I heard a crack.


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100 WC – Siddeeqah

As I lay my head on my desk, a sweet smell of candy drifted through my nose.It’s luxurious smell kept distracting me from my amazing story I was writing.I tried to figure out in my head where the smell was coming from.I knew it wouldn’t be my mother as she is a terrible cook (she even burns toast).I know it was hopeless looking so I went back to my story and then remembered, I had forgot to look in the garden. Each step I took the smell was becoming stronger, and then I spotted it. It looked appalling, but it said sweet on the wrapper.


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The Rainforest

I was devastated to find that the surprise trip we was going on and the one I was excited about was the Rainforest. It’s not that I don’t like colourful trees that just stand there doing nothing (I don’t) but it’s the animals that lurk beneath your feet or above your head.Even when my mum said she’d cut some of my chores I still wasn’t too keen.She really wanted me to go on this “special” trip because mean Megan (it’s her nickname at school) is invited and she want’s to make a good impression.When we arrived,it was silent.I’d broke the silence,”but it is yellow.”…


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100wc samir week22

Gliding  through the forest, the wind gentaly blew towords my face as soft as an cats fur. For a second my bordy stood still as an rock but when i saw an enormous storm coming towords me i sprinted as if a groilla was chasing me. While running a paper rapper flew past me but it said ‘sweet’ on the rapper for no reason i grabed the rapper and threw it at the storm suddenly it stopped. I wondered if god threw the rapper to protect me it was a weired feeling but i was happy i was protected so i carried on walking through the forest.


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100WC Anjana Week 22

Every single day mum never lets me and my sister go in the top cupboard in the kitchen . I never know why so one day I was went to see what was in the cupboard. Mum say that i’ve got to cut the sweets but how can I.My sister and I ran to the cupboard see what was in side  and guess what was inside. SWEETS!!! Not hearing the door open I had to have a sweet immediately . But I’d remembered  what mum said to me to cut the sweets but I never listen. “What are you doing” shouted mum. But it said ‘sweet’ on the wrapper . And I’ve been grounded ever since.


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There was a boy called Jack. What he like best was sweets . Also It always had to be sweet. One day he brought a lollipop and on the rapper it said it was sweet he taste it and then it tasted sour. So he spat it out and said “but it said ‘sweet’ on the rapper ” he felt confused why it taste sour instead of sweet. He told the owner why it said sweet instead of sour the shop keeper said “look closer and you will see what it really says” when he realized what it was he noticed what he really liked was sour sweets .


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Prannoy’s 100wc 23rd week

I was in the middle of nowhere, my feet were hurting BADLY! It seeded to me like it was a forest, so I couldn’t rest anywhere because the last time I did I was nearly eaten by a Tiger. So if I even want rest anywhere it should be in the day and in a dry place. As I discovered the silent forest, in the distance I could see something blueish in the distance. Was it an animal? Slowly but surely, I went to it. It was a….a…a SOFA.THAT’S WHAT I NEEDED. The sofa was dry like the sun, it was kind of dirty tough and some golden-autumn leaf were cover it. I was very surprised because there was a sofa in the middle of nowhere.

 


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Week#23 100wc Tom

There it stood.The old hard rock.Well that was what everyone called it,but I new better.It was a sofer with it’s softly purring marmalade cat.Having a lovely soft mattress with many bouncy springs made it amazing.I would spend hours on end playing with the cat on 50 the sofa.When the wind hould the frills around the edges would sway and the arm rests would rock but the sofa would stay hole.I would sometimes get worried and ask my mum”will rot the l decay the sofa ?” And mum would say “o no”,with a smile.

Yet I was the only one.


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100cw Week 21 Sara

I sat next to the window, my cute white cat Butterscout gently sat on my lap. Then my eyes looked at the window and saw snowflakes sprinkling down to the snowy, white ground, while i drank my  warm tea. The silence was deafening. A girl appeared from nowhere. The girl wore a fluffy pink coat, purple gloves, a blue hat, red boots and a yellow scarf. She was building a big snowman and put lovely decorations on it. After the girl went home. Butterscout jumped off my lap and wiggled his white fluffy tail. I was laughing so loud that all the birds flew to the sky.


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100 WC – Jessica

As I entered the house,the first thing I noticed was the skin-crawling music coming from the living room. A broken record player sat in the middle of the room. While approaching the music player, I lifted the needle off the disc. The silence was deafening but somehow I felt a lot calmer. I let out a sigh of relief. Then everything happened so quickly. As if by magic, the record player shriecked the sound track. The old-fashioned T.V. started changing channels in the corner of the room and… It all stopped. Then the T.V. changed into a two word channel.

GO AWAY!


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Week 21 100WC Eileen

11.2.15

Today I sat with Harry Turnbull in maths because he was messing around with Bob Bomont at the end of the table. I was so annoyed at Betty and Olivia because they were invited to Lewis’ birthday party on Friday. The silent was deafening. I found out that Betty is Brandon Eggbert cousin. Mum was telling Miss Duley about how I wasn’t getting enough sleep because of Martha, now I’m being watched by the teachers. Unfair. My little sister, Martha, has just started talking and now talks in her sleep.

This is Charley Evens for you!


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Jayden’s 100wc

 

Hi my name is jayden  and I am going to be a football player when i am in year 7 because I am in to football at the momant in time. when I am older i am going to play for xi. 16 years later we where at the wold cup finals.  I was running with the ball I was in the boxs I went to shoot but all a sudant I was on the floor the silence was deafening when i got up I did not know where I was or what to do. I sat there for ages I heard poeple in the coridoor.Then some thing said hi Jayden.


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